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Now.
The only reason I am submitting this here is for opinions. If you do not have an opinion, your comment will be hidden.

This is a project for class that I am working on currently, and am not sure what else if anything else needs to be done to it.

Figure: ~Dove-Stock
Background (before alteration): ~enchanted-stock
Textures: Found here by filtering them to the most popular over all time and on Stock.Xchng
Brushes are found on the internets out in space
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viscusregnum Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
ahhh wonderfully expressive.
reminds me a bit of a game i love called silent hill.

lovely :heart:
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2ik Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is nice ..
*the floor* i think that you shouldn't make the blood & her reflection fade from the left side ..
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zamir Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2008
floore must be of some other color. because it dont match with the bg and with the model...the atmosphere is gothic and such atmosphere cant be portrayd on such a floor...never mind dear brother maxy.
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FrodoPrime Featured By Owner May 25, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
love the pose and dynamism of the model and the colored background but the checkerboard detracts
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junkster78 Featured By Owner May 25, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
What do you suggest then for a floor?
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FrodoPrime Featured By Owner May 26, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
I tried blacking it out and that did not work; also tried just copying the background you added above and that worked but not sure you were aiming at that. I think just taming down the floor darkening it with selecting the floor then using curves and select colors to make it less pristine.
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junkster78 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Hmm... I'll play with that and get back to you at your e-mail address. It's already been recurved once to darken it (lol), so I'll see what I can come up with =]
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symethra Featured By Owner May 24, 2008
I would like to see more colour in her face and body, maybe more illumination of her figure? or is she the focal point?
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plaidedbra Featured By Owner May 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, but the model doesn't seem to blend in with the background (you might've done that on purpose, of course). The main thing I'd change is to give her back her colors; she's a bit too desaturated/gray. Even the floor has color/brightness, though it's black and white.

The detail with her forehead is especially cool; I almost missed it, and I like that it's not very noticable. If you give the model more color, the blood on her forehead shouldn't stand out too much.

I hope that helped. Great work!
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junkster78 Featured By Owner May 24, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
I do see what your saying, but when I'm looking at it (color corrected display) her tone actually does match that of the background / floor if you really look at it =]

Thanks for the feedback, been waiting for some.
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Frank-Beer Featured By Owner May 24, 2008   Photographer
Wonderful piece of art, you created there.:heart: Full of fantasy and emotion. You blended the pieces together very well. :blackrose:
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x-xLithiumx-x Featured By Owner May 23, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is very good. very morbid. it flows well. i used the same stock but i like yours. very amazingly good!
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