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Useless by `junkster78:iconjunkster78:

Categories Digital Art > Photomanipulation > Dark

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Now.
The only reason I am submitting this here is for opinions. If you do not have an opinion, your comment will be hidden.

This is a project for class that I am working on currently, and am not sure what else if anything else needs to be done to it.

Figure: ~Dove-Stock
Background (before alteration): ~enchanted-stock
Textures: Found here by filtering them to the most popular over all time and on Stock.Xchng
Brushes are found on the internets out in space

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~x-xLithiumx-x May 23, 2008, 8:06:12 PM
this is very good. very morbid. it flows well. i used the same stock but i like yours. very amazingly good!

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He watched her take off her makeup and wondered why she even put it on...:rose:
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=rav777 May 24, 2008, 4:33:10 AM
Wonderful piece of art, you created there.:heart: Full of fantasy and emotion. You blended the pieces together very well. :blackrose:

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Kind regards,
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Frank

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~plaidedbra May 24, 2008, 9:36:00 AM
I like it, but the model doesn't seem to blend in with the background (you might've done that on purpose, of course). The main thing I'd change is to give her back her colors; she's a bit too desaturated/gray. Even the floor has color/brightness, though it's black and white.

The detail with her forehead is especially cool; I almost missed it, and I like that it's not very noticable. If you give the model more color, the blood on her forehead shouldn't stand out too much.

I hope that helped. Great work!
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`junkster78 May 24, 2008, 9:43:47 AM
I do see what your saying, but when I'm looking at it (color corrected display) her tone actually does match that of the background / floor if you really look at it =]

Thanks for the feedback, been waiting for some.

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"Don't look at my finger. Look at the moon."
Derrick Jensen
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~symethra May 24, 2008, 9:51:06 AM
I would like to see more colour in her face and body, maybe more illumination of her figure? or is she the focal point?

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Far better is it to dare mighty things, to win glorious triumphs, even though checked by failure...than to rank with those poor spirits who neither enjoy much nor suffer much, because they live in a gray twilight that knows not victory nor defeat.
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~FrodoPrime May 25, 2008, 6:55:04 PM
love the pose and dynamism of the model and the colored background but the checkerboard detracts
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`junkster78 May 25, 2008, 7:43:45 PM
What do you suggest then for a floor?

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"Don't look at my finger. Look at the moon."
Derrick Jensen
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~FrodoPrime May 26, 2008, 5:09:17 AM
I tried blacking it out and that did not work; also tried just copying the background you added above and that worked but not sure you were aiming at that. I think just taming down the floor darkening it with selecting the floor then using curves and select colors to make it less pristine.
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`junkster78 May 26, 2008, 6:53:38 AM
Hmm... I'll play with that and get back to you at your e-mail address. It's already been recurved once to darken it (lol), so I'll see what I can come up with =]

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"Don't look at my finger. Look at the moon."
Derrick Jensen
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